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I noticed after posting it, that my previous post had
some errors. That's because I realized that I was about to miss my deadline by
about one minute. Therefore, I rushed to post it as soon as I was finished
writing it to make it on time, "cinderella-style." Here are some
corrections:
First paragraph, fifth sentence, should be
"basis" not basic.
Fourth paragraph, third sentence, should not have that
extra "to." There may be others.
Thanks,
Sarah
I'm glad you proofread it! Next time, Cinderella, get to the ball by 4 p.m. so that you can take a break for a few hours, rest your eyes, and then return to proofread without the pressure of the clock.
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